May I ask if the UN dude is high?
Anyways, not a big fan of loops.
May I ask if the UN dude is high?
Anyways, not a big fan of loops.
Always.
If you want my opinion, this is decently good. Your other two loops aren't realy in my interest; but they're good for loops. Also, like you, I'm not very old and Edd definitely inspired me. I'm working on my first real animation too. Your great already, and this has an Eddsworld feel to it.
To me, that's a good and bad thing. Cool because it's a cool video, but partially bad simply because people might say your copying. I think for you it would be good to stick with this for awhile, yet maybe think up a new name for your series.
Either way, nice video.
How's â"¢Pablo's Corner?
Well; I'm going to give you the truth. The mouth movements weren't good. The background was weird and didn't function good. I barely understood a word of what they were saying; and technically the quality made me technically not care. I do think you should think of a better plot for any of your videos and practice more.
Your honesty is a respected virtue. I am new with flash, as you can see. I will learn and grow with helpful criticism as so.
Not bad- not bad at all. Even if it looks like a colored sketch- it still has a good fee; to it, yet I do think the color around the edges of things could have been better. Also, the animation is choppy. Yet, still good and good choice of music for your preview. Good luck with it.
Thank you a lot for yourcomment! I would just like to say that I drew the background the way it is on purpose, in my opinion it's sketchy style fits the character John. I drew old furniture and thought about all that. I agree that the animation is choppy, but if I had added more frames, it would have been wobbly :P
I actually worked pretty hard on this and the low rating (compared to my other animations) surprises me, and it disturbes me that no one took the time (exept from you) to write something. It has a lower score than my other animation, which is, in my opinion, not as interesting as this one.
A great animation for on paper, and if it was an on-the-computer animation it's still not bad. Funny plot.
i wish i could have exported it better, but hardware sucks.
Not bad, but not as good as the one up currently, a bit short compared to the other one too.
Yeah i know, First Animation Sucks :3
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